Geisha's winter face.
Frozen lake with life beneath
cracks under his kiss.
Friday, November 11, 2011
Primal shrieks and steamed silence.
Jungle of your heart.
Here is what the haiku monday judge (moi) said about my haiku. It's so spectacular, I have to post it:
FLEUR: For Fleur, our resident Kate Bush of Haiku in High Heels, love is a battlefield. A stranger in an open car. A gas. An eventual pain in the ass. And boy, don't Pat Benetar and Debbie Harry wished they'd written "primal shrieks and steamed silence?" I know I do.
Thank you, Moi!