It's very nice. For what it's worth, there's a site that purports to show the proper amount of syllables.http://www.howmanysyllables.com/404.htmlIt shows wired as ONE.
I love the word wraith! You have a way with words when it comes to these haiku. And well, look! 3x winner. There's the proof.Yummy looking neck, btw..
Ah....very evocative neck, sure to boost any, uh, neck-n-neck jusgin'!Greet verse, Fleur, up to your usual excellent standard. An' a see somebody ( or more?) done expounded on Czar's commentary on the one or two syllable question this mornin'. An' Czar back at 'em. Happy Haiku Monday.
"My heart is a wraith" is a most excellent image.
Thank you all!
I like the word "wraith." Of course, I have not a clue what it means.
You are such a romantic lady! All your haikus reflect this sweet aspect of your personality.Happy Haiku MondayHugsJon
Hi Fleur!Haiku Monday theme is up at the Pond.Blowfish and I are looking forward to your entries. Blessings on your weekend .... er ... no wraiths.