Sunday, October 23, 2011

Haiku Monday: Ghost


My heart is a wraith;
haunted and caught, tangled in
your sweet barbed-wire love.
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    It's very nice. For what it's worth, there's a site that purports to show the proper amount of syllables.

    http://www.howmanysyllables.com/404.html

    It shows wired as ONE.

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  2. darkfoamOctober 24, 2011 at 3:36 AM

    I love the word wraith! You have a way with words when it comes to these haiku. And well, look! 3x winner. There's the proof.
    Yummy looking neck, btw..

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  3. Aunty BelleOctober 24, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    Ah....very evocative neck, sure to boost any, uh, neck-n-neck jusgin'!

    Greet verse, Fleur, up to your usual excellent standard.

    An' a see somebody ( or more?) done expounded on Czar's commentary on the one or two syllable question this mornin'. An' Czar back at 'em.

    Happy Haiku Monday.

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  4. moiOctober 24, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    "My heart is a wraith" is a most excellent image.

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  5. FleurdeleoOctober 24, 2011 at 2:03 PM

    Thank you all!

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  6. czarOctober 24, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    I like the word "wraith." Of course, I have not a clue what it means.

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  7. DeepBlueOctober 24, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    You are such a romantic lady! All your haikus reflect this sweet aspect of your personality.

    Happy Haiku Monday
    Hugs
    Jon

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  8. fishyOctober 28, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    Hi Fleur!

    Haiku Monday theme is up at the Pond.
    Blowfish and I are looking forward to your entries.

    Blessings on your weekend .... er ... no wraiths.

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