Fleur's Pearls: Haiku Monday: Time

Monday, December 5, 2011

The second hand sweeps.
My pulse thrums like summer rain;
one beat skips for you.

RafaelDecember 6, 2011 at 10:48 AM
A watched pot never boils and a timed love never turns the corner.

Beautiful poem, I liked very MUCH!
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Madeleine Begun KaneDecember 6, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Lovely haiku!
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FleurdeleoDecember 7, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Raffi and Ms.Mad. I appreciate your comments! Haiku Monday just speaks to my soul!
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fishyDecember 9, 2011 at 4:23 PM
"thrums" was .... perfection.
I am always so impressed with the depth you transmit in just 17 syllables. Genius.
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FleurdeleoDecember 9, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Oh, Fishy, thank you! That made me feel great!
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fishyDecember 10, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Happy Saturday Fleur.
Haiku Monday is being hosted at the Pond this week. Come play with us!
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