Monday, December 5, 2011

Haiku Monday: Time



The second hand sweeps.
My pulse thrums like summer rain;
one beat skips for you.

6 comments:

  1. A watched pot never boils and a timed love never turns the corner.

    Beautiful poem, I liked very MUCH!

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  2. Thank you Raffi and Ms.Mad. I appreciate your comments! Haiku Monday just speaks to my soul!

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  3. "thrums" was .... perfection.
    I am always so impressed with the depth you transmit in just 17 syllables. Genius.

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  4. Oh, Fishy, thank you! That made me feel great!

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  5. Happy Saturday Fleur.
    Haiku Monday is being hosted at the Pond this week. Come play with us!

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